Jasmine Hart

Sorry about this ditzy question, I know the answer has to be somewhere, I just can't find it...how do I change my signature? I did it before, I just can't ...

May I join please?If not, disregard my bio. Name:Keturah (Ket) Age:Early twenties Hair:Brown and matted. Eyes:Blue and hardend. Complexion:Very pale, almost sickly. Attire:Worn, brown trousers, torn a

Ok, apologies for my neglect! This seems dead, so it looks like I'm writing on corpses, but whatever.Here goes. Brigid "Wake up."Oisin whispered, in what he seemed to believe was ...

Probably something like Bartonhurst in the River. Maybe we're neighbours!Lol.

Lol. This is brilliant! Mine was, Baroness Jasmine the Formidable of Bartonhurst in the River. Lol. I like it.

the dark hours

Ooooh, and I just thought of something else which might help. Power through!Just write, write, write until your first draft is done. Tie the editor in your head up and ...

Only ditch your story when you really, really hate it, lasting hatred, not this, "oh my chapter isn't working for me right now so I hate this book." And, like ...

It's not lame, it just needs work.

First off, you don't need the apostrophe in "it's", as thsi means "it is."You have some nice imagery here, but the rhyme isn't working for you here. It sounds forced, ...

Lovely, lovely, lovely! But please do take the suggestions on punctuation and capital letters, as omitting them makes this look sloppy, and that's a shame since it's so beautiful. I ...

Your style here was interesting. It reminded me of tenis. I liked the ending, but I'd suggest using more vivid imagery throughout, to really make this yours.The last three lines ...

Yes, this wasn't all that original, but, if I put that to one side, I have to say that I enjoyed the pace of this poem. You really conveyed your ...

Your rhythm here is very good. I think I'd scrap the word "Oh" as it weakens the impact.Your rhyme works well for you here, and the first stanza is great. ...

This is very good, but I'd make line six a syllably shorter to help with the flow, and maybe change line three to "Her bravery is not enough." I love ...